The Demon Chronicles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 24, 2010.

  1. *whimper* IT'S A WEREWOLF! RUN!!
























    Not! *brings up crossbow and shoots the dog*
    HAHA
     
  2. *growls* DOG!?!









    *Whips u with a chain*
     
  3. Wow it kinda funny how into this u guys get
     
  4. *uses author powers to give Utho an Cass epic armor and weapons*
     
  5. Lol! Makes seats and popcorn and soda and candy to watch battle
     
  6. *uses epic gear and lightning at cass*

    Someone needs to put this dog DOWN!
     
  7. WHERE THE HELL IS MY SWORD

    GRRR


    *knocks utho off hiss feet*
     
  8. *gives cass sword*
     
  9. Hehehe
    *takes the sword* >:D
     
  10. Ok name is Amber. She's a kickass girl who wants revenge cuz her parents were killed and she uses a crossbow and dagger. NO ONE STEAL THIS!!!
     
  11. Name: Amber
    ...

    Lol jk
     
  12. Hey I got a GREAT idea for a character

    Her name is Amber. Her parents died and she uses a crossbow.

    So original right? I hope no one takes it...
     
  13. *stabs utho*
    opps
    Did i do tht.?
    Hehehe