Power is in 1

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *warlord97 (01), Aug 12, 2010.

  1. Summary:
    Gazing out past a meadow of dragon families, past the valley of treacherous volcanoes full of magma n great heat, u could see villages. These villages were united, but they didn't know it... Each group was a clan n each clan hated other clans... There were 6 clans, the clan of Death the clan of Life the clan of Defence, the clan of Attack, the clan of Spies, and the clan if Clans... Each had special abilities to do great things... Each had a leader... Each had an army... Each had bravery... Each had diverse powers... The only thing was that they were weak apart but together they could unite to fight against far away lands to save their families to save themselves and to prove that they should unite to be one large clan of all power... Throughout this story there will be many challenges certain member faced but at a time there was help for them and they would have help from unlikely warriors as well... New names new faces new beginnings for all!
     
  2. Ik sum may not know me but I wrote this as an idea of wt my main story will include... And I hope for my story and others' stories to help inspire ppl who wish to write of something amazing
     
  3. Plz post true things about wt u think n be honest... N if u want tell me wt could be removed or added...
     
  4. Great start CONTINUE! also it would b best with me as the main character!
     
  5. Thanx n I'll have to think about the main character... But u mite b mentioned
     
  6. Ppl I don't care if u don't like or u do like, I just wanna c if ur opinions will encourage me to make it a story or not
     
  7. Warlord come and tell us how ig and zaft have framed the crap out of ur clan ??
     
  8. U no wt duz tht have to do with my summary
     
  9. Everyone needs a Ginger wizard
     
  10. Wow sis!!! u never told me u wrote that well i only knew tht u write... idk wht ther about but thts a great beginning... heres an idea... u shud try adding ur big bro as a cool character... n then ull b able to get a ton of views cuz im full of pure awesomeness!!! I give u a 10/10!!! :D
     
  11. Thanx o n DOW ik ur my bro, but u shud b glad i f ur at least in it
     
  12. Like what you got there. Especially the capablity of being a long tale. Because there's so much background stories that would go on. Like people with in each clan not always agreeing with each other. Other than that, keep up the good work.
     
  13. Thanx I hope tht more ppl will read the summary n then wanna read the story... Thanx fir the positive words!
     
  14. I sent a feedback to the devs once saying "do devs/mods actually read all the feedback?" and I got this a few minutes later
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