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    Please remove that pic!
    It hurts my eyes!


    Edit: Yes it errored!
     
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    I'm not gonna lie and say it's good or even that I took the time to read it. But if you enjoy writing and being creative more power to ya and keep at it.
     
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    Stream of consciousness?

    Life writing, so hipster.
     
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    Support Very Nice.
     
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    It was good, but then I realized it was like a 30 page long book I had to stop.
     
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    Well done Op... Ignore the haters
     
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    I have no idea what I just read.
     
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    Nice
     
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    Gum When r u gonna release the PartII ?? Waiting for that eagerly :)
     
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    big wall of text... tl;dr
     
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    Good one Gummy
     
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    TL;DR
     
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    Gum what you've just said is one of the most insanely idiotic things I've ever read. At no point in your rambling, incoherent novel was there anything that could even be considered a rational thought. Everyone in this thread is now dumber for having reading it. I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul.

    Billy Madison moment
     
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    The heck is this? Broken-sentences, kaw/RL intertwined poop... Read first 5 lines skimmed the rest. Scrolled to comments and laughed
     
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    300t?
     
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    K
     
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    Thanks for those that read. It is a book
    I also.have offers from publisher
    It's from 138 Page book.
    Thanks for reading
    And the ones that didn't thanks for the honesty. Harb sir I award you 3 stars for your input. Once you can understand art then it falls into place
     
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    Not locked?? Wow slow day maybe
     
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    But wait... There's more.