my story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HyourinmaruIceDragonPrince, Jan 8, 2015.

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  1. Put the entire story in the first post, add some color and BAM!, a good thread
     
    #41 --Mule, Jan 8, 2015
  2. I like ice cream
     
    #42 JoHnEdEE, Jan 8, 2015
  3. A 'good thread' doesn't require colour
     
    #43 Pie, Jan 9, 2015
  4. one of few posts I agree with on this thread.
     
    #44 Balto573, Jan 9, 2015

  5. <3
     
    #45 Pie, Jan 9, 2015
  6. Support
     
    #46 XXIII_FIN_IIIXX, Jan 9, 2015
  7. Waaaaay too damn long... Summarize it plz. Then I might read it.
     
    #47 _CorruptedCreator_, Jan 9, 2015
  8. no when you get knocked out everything goes black, thats what he/she was referring to
     
    #48 Creams_Dreams, Jan 9, 2015
  9. Screw off
     
    #49 Nathan_WINNING, Jan 9, 2015
  10. If OP wants to make a story for people to read then let op make the story
     
    #50 Nathan_WINNING, Jan 9, 2015
  11. And likewise, if people want to proclaim their distaste for the story then let them do so
     
    #51 Pie, Jan 9, 2015
  12. FF has been in AT for a couple months now
     
    #52 Nathan_WINNING, Jan 9, 2015
  13. This was to Balto, who proclaimed his distaste over several off topic posts.
     
    #53 Nathan_WINNING, Jan 9, 2015
  14. Why? :-\
     
    #54 SoloKill, Jan 12, 2015
  15. Don't be so mean to op...
    Btw no support to the story :lol:
     
    #55 SoloKill, Jan 12, 2015
  16. Yes, FF and FC go straight to AT now and I cannot be any happier about it.

    OP, I am glad that you have decided to write a story, and happier that you have decided to show us. That being said, giver your readers organization.

    Guide to FF Take a look at this, if you would.

    Let this thread die down, then you can revise and edit it. Afterwards, bump it to show your improvements.

    Happy KaWing
     
    #56 -IIXII-AJ-IIXII-, Jan 12, 2015
  17. Support for your support.
     
    #57 xXP_3Xx_StormWolf_xXP_3Xx, Jan 12, 2015
  18. Forums isnt meant for your bs, gtfo cause no body cares, theres an app where you can go post your stories where people will actually read it
     
    #58 KarmasFury, Jan 12, 2015
  19. Support
     
    #59 IlALEJANDROIl, Jan 12, 2015
  20. You just need some lessons in creative writing OP.
     
    #60 xXP_3Xx_StormWolf_xXP_3Xx, Jan 12, 2015
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