[/color=red] new eb request!!here it goes [/color] [/color=blue] Scremen the Fallen! Info! Your forces enter the deeply forest,searching for it,they dont know,but Scremen is watching and ready to attack! Phase 1! Bar 1: Scout to 0/17800 Scremen comes into view,scout to find his weakness Bar 2: Steal to O/24740 Steal his power from the gem on his chest Bar 3: attackinate to 0/178000 having weakened him,you advance! Main Bar Attack to 35% Phase 2! Bar 1: Scremen brings the forest to life,protect yourselves! use seal of deflection to 0/19200 Bar 2: Scremen's forest is defeated,but what has he brung now?scout to 0/42000 Main Bar! Attack to 0% Scremen has been captured,all forces defeated,now advance and look for his loot,and beware the dreaded beast [/color]
Yeah, needs more work. Who's scremen? What do they do/look like? Need some concept behind the name, some substance... Something. You're giving phases that already sound familiar, get creative.
You can't use a lame excuse like that, War. Woifie done something 10 times as good. I bet he was also 'tired'.
Lock this thread. Get a concept prepped. Get more information regarding the eb and 'Scremen' etc. Post your final draft.
Not a bad start..get pictures though and try to make the item phases unique like fod was when it first came out. Look up some mythology and incorporate it. It will make it much more interesting. For now though lock this thread, it's not going anywhere good.
Op when using bbcodes don't use at the start [/color=, cause that won't work so only use [color=, that'll work much easier for you.