the apocalypse feedback thread

Awesome

 

No problem

 

Nows my chance lol I'm most definatly not balto573 this dalton guy seems awesome ! What's that? My fake mustache fell off? Oh crap!!!!! I was never here!!

 

Lol remember I did not use my real name

 

Oh that's gonna be really suspenseful  anyway I like it so far

 

its really :shock: good

 

Just to say, with the prolouge, its a bit boring saying "Dr street ran through the lab biting everyone" it sounds better to say "Dr street ran through the lab; Alarm horns blaring and screeching"
Anyway good for your first story

 

Instead of rewriting the whole thing after you've done just read over each chapter before you post it and chuck some adjectives in, but I love it!

 

It's very good for your first story.

 

Thanks for the shoutout.
Just so you know, you said that each group had 5 members but i think group 2 has 6.

 

I know what it was now. You included the leader in group 2 but didn't for the other groups.