See your making this into a sci-fi possibly? No idea,but make sure not to cram this full of action thingys,it is the year 3140 after all.
I enjoyed reading this first part of your story. It has a clever title along with a clever introduction. Sadly, I would have to use two hands to count all of the typos I read, just in this one prologue, which is not something I am used to seeing in your stories. Aside from that, the sentences seemed a bit choppy and your story lacked detail about the setting. Here are my questions. Where was this at? Was it on a boat? Was it in a space station? Are everyone tiny people in a tiny civilization located on a giant Twinkie? What did the main character look like? What was her name? Overall, however it was a decent story and you did a great job .
Thanks... Sorry about the mistakes, I'm tired. I'll make sure there are no more. No description for a reason, don't worry. There will more soon.
Someone of you may be needing this. Again, post here not on the story thread. And, no Plane. I'm not a clone. Nor do I have one. Unfortunately....
HOW DO YOU GET SO GOOD AT WRITING!!!! HACKS THIS IS ******* REDICULOUS HE IS TOO GOOD!!!!! NOBODY IS THIS TALENTED ABSOLUTE BS!!!!! I WILL BREAK THE ROBOT THAT IS WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!