Truth or Dare Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Capital_4, Jun 11, 2013.

  1. Hey guys! To prevent the story thread from getting too crowded, I decided to make a feedback thread! So...yeah.
     
    #1 Capital_4, Jun 11, 2013
  2. Nice
     
    #2 L00KER, Jun 12, 2013
  3. From now on, positive and negative feedback, suggestions and updates, and other crap like that shall be posted HERE
     
    #3 Capital_4, Jul 8, 2013
  4. Explain some stuff better, and please keep writing
     
    #4 DeathByBeauty, Jul 8, 2013
  5. This needs a lot of work. Please answer, did you just throw this together in a few days? It lacks detail and hook. Add more body to your story and you may get something great. But this story still needs a lot of work.
     
    #5 Invincible1707, Jul 8, 2013
  6. Bump
     
    #6 Amberclaw2000, Jul 8, 2013
  7. Please don't. ^
     
    #7 Invincible1707, Jul 10, 2013
  8. O, shut it. I can if I want. 
     
    #8 Amberclaw2000, Jul 11, 2013
  9. I wonder if he's actually taking my advice and taking the time to think out a storyline and add some details and hook to it already XD
     
    #9 Invincible1707, Jul 11, 2013
  10. Little weird and exciting, too little information about who they are how things happen, and why
     
    #10 Black7White, Jul 25, 2013
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