The Writer's Café

hello, im new to the whole writing thing, and i could use some feedback (any feedback :mrgreen: ) and i was wondering if you guys could check out my start of a story: The Surprise Invasion

 

I'm sorry smighter. :'(

 

Can you guys please check out A Changing Personality? Would love some more feedback.

 

Hey queen

 

I'm so sorry Smighter thoughts are with you and his family

 

Hey iP (your new nickname) how's life? Haven't seen you around lately!

 

Until about a month ago, I had deleted the app for about a year lol so I haven't really been around

 

Oh okay! Well welcome back, good to see your name around again.

 

S'alright. The world doesn't revolve around me, does it? ;P

Wb, iPim!

 

Good to see you.
I though you came back like a month ago?

 

Surprised the account is intact. Meddlesome devs.

 

Mine was still intact after 8 months of inactivity, lol.

 

I thought the same thing

 

You bought from them, so that might mean that they'll keep the profile alive longer in hopes of future transactions.

 

And people were posting on my wall so maybe I looked active

 

I suppose the devs know which accounts will cause an upset when deleted.

 

Corinthian was gone for a long time. Not deleted. Good example of what you're saying, Cand

 

And Spragga. Who knows how long he's been inactive?

 

A year or so. But I still have the suspicion that Spragga was a dev having a laugh with us KaWers.

 

Oh noes 