Really good storyline so far, well written, a great amount of effort involved, looking forward to the next part
All sounding good. I'm not going to lie, it doesn't really seem like my kind of book because I'm not a big fan of 'spin offs' - if you will - of original books, but I may decide to follow the story. Keep going though, looks like it has great potential, and what I said was based on pure opinion and preference.
I like it so far, very similar to the Hunger Games but that was a best selling book so that's not necessarily a bad thing. Very well written, good job overall. Keep it going.