Venture - Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Winters, May 31, 2012.

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  1. Post all feedback for Venture here!


    Thanks and enjoy :D
     
    #1 Winters, May 31, 2012
  2. Could they just post it on the other thread about the subject that you are telling people to post here?
    smh
     
    #2 Tommy11, May 31, 2012
  3. Sexy awesome! :3
     
    #3 Eagleking, May 31, 2012
  4. Great stuff! It's piqued my interest even more.
     
    #4 Storallelite, May 31, 2012
  5.  ENTER PARADOX.
     
    #5 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 31, 2012
  6. Badass.

    First human apart from Winters, brap.
     
    #6 Interrobang, May 31, 2012
  7. SPOILARZZZ! I will be da gui hoo savz da dai!!!!
     
    #7 cheesemuffin, May 31, 2012
  8. Ouch cheese,
    Did you really have to do that?
     
    #8 Interrobang, May 31, 2012
  9. Para, that was just Cheese messing around. He doesn't know anything xP
     
    #9 Winters, May 31, 2012
  10. It's more my grammar unicorness.

    I do not speak nub or troll.

    It pains me to see nub speak or troll.
     
    #10 Interrobang, May 31, 2012
  11. Oh xP
     
    #11 Winters, May 31, 2012
  12. Second chapter may come later tonight.
     
    #12 Winters, May 31, 2012
  13. Nub and troll are both disgusting languages that should be wiped from the face of the Earth.
     
    #13 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 31, 2012
  14. Unless you play World of Warcraft:3 trolls ftw...

    Anyways good job winters:) i like it
     
    #14 *Rangoth (01), Jun 1, 2012
  15. Finally me like
     
    #15 *PielordTy (01), Jun 1, 2012
  16. Tis boss story
     
    #16 *PielordTy (01), Jun 1, 2012
  17. It's later tonight I want new chapter.
     
    #17 *PielordTy (01), Jun 1, 2012
  18. Like a boss. I love it and I cant wait to see more about the suspicious character
     
    #18 *Lace-_- (01), Jun 1, 2012
  19. Bump and winters can I bump story it's almost on 2nd page
     
    #19 *PielordTy (01), Jun 2, 2012
  20. I read the prologue. Now I need to read chapter one...
     
    #20 FeatherHunter, Jun 2, 2012
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