I got how to do dialogue and how not to do it, along with flow. I can do fantasy right, just not slice-of-life fanfiction. (Not Highschool fanfiction, that stuff's BS) Any advice? Everyone calls my the exception to the rule when it comes to ordinary, well as ordinary as you can get, life; so I really don't know how to write it properly.
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