A Night Bird's Song

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xXx_TDD_Lady_Lust_TDD_xXx, Apr 20, 2012.

  1. As the wind blows through the sky
    A night bird call to me,
    She sings a song of days gone by
    And how things used to be.
    The story of how life has been
    When they were very young,
    The love that they shared together
    Where the moon and the stars hung.
    Content days and times of joy
    She thought they'd never pass,
    A strong and quite determined boy
    And she a special lass.
    Then one day as a cloud rolled by
    There came a thunderous boom,
    Their world came crashing down
    Now left alone to face her gloom.
    As time went by she learned to live
    And hold her memories dear,
    Now she wonders through the night
    A lonely song we hear.
     
  2. wow no haters here? Strange..
     
  3. don't worry it DOES suck. nobody really cares about your feelings.

    and this section only has a small fraction of people who visit. these threads only show on active topics on PC accounts.

    it's friendly crowd anyways to this sort of material. so don't get too excited. it's not any good.
     
  4. It does not suck ignore d bo.
    You have written a marvellous poem!
     
  5. Encore! I want more poems!
     
  6. poetry is a dead art form. and this poem belongs with the rest of poetry.

    in the garbage.
     
  7. Dbo, you're just jealous.

    Keep going, I like it!
     
  8. jealous of jungle rot? jealous of decaying flesh?

    jealous of crap? no
     
  9. Thank u everyone for ur support and lack there of.
     
  10. More to come. I promise. Some good some maybe not so good.
     
  11. It's cool bro ham! Don't let that bro worry ya!
     
  12. It's quite sad.... Very well written.



    ::::thumbs up::::::
     
  13. That was amazing! I couldn't write a poem to save my life :3