The Evil Knights Thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012.

  1. Book 1
    Prologue
    Coldplay902 walked down the murky path with soldiers.The kingdom was going to war against The Evil Knights.They had to track down the castle.Master Knight was nervous and nobody knew why.But one possibility struck Coldplay902 and he batted it away:It was Master knight was the head of the organization.
     
    #1 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  2. Chapter 1
    It was night when Coldlplay902 found the palace.It was all black with a red hand in it's center.It was real.Guards were all over the place so Coldplay902 killed them.He walked into the palace and found master knights armor on the floor.Then a voice said"hello Coldplay902."It was master knight.
     
    #2 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  3. I want next part
     
    #3 Davy8, Apr 17, 2012
  4. Chapter 2

    Coldplay902 couldn't believe his ears.Master knight was master of evil knights.It meant he had to fight him.He pulled his sword out and got in ready position.The fight had began.
     
    #4 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  5. Chapter 3

    The swordsmanship was amazing.There was ducking,kicking and shouting.The battle made it outside and everyone stared in amazement.Then Coldplay902 got kicked and fell.Dust went in his eyes and he writhed in pain.He waited for the final stab.Then he got up and saw his horse kicking master knight hard.For once,He was proud of his horse.
     
    #5 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  6. Chapter 4

    Coldplay902's horse kicked up a lot of dirt.Then at one point they heard a terrible snap and a scream.Then silence.Master knight was dead.But they knew that evil would return.
     
    #6 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  7. Epilogue

    Master evil knight stared at the stars.He saw a kingdom.Coldplay902's Kingdom.He couldn't control himself."Minions attack!"
     
    #7 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  8. wait, didnt usaris kill master knight already?
     
    #8 KoeiWarrior, Apr 17, 2012
  9. Remember new master knight
     
    #9 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  10. ohh. lol forgot bout that
     
    #10 KoeiWarrior, Apr 17, 2012
  11. Comments:
     
    #11 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  12. you should put at least 1 badass video game character in your stories. lol
     
    #12 KoeiWarrior, Apr 17, 2012
  13. :shock:
     
    #13 KoeiWarrior, Apr 17, 2012
  14. I'll put in that Barry guy from jetpack joyride
     
    #14 coldplay902, Apr 17, 2012
  15. what! hes not badass at all.
     
    #15 KoeiWarrior, Apr 17, 2012
  16. what about master chief with an energy sword. or a well known swordsman? ooh!! i know! a wizard! merlin perhaps. im just throwing ideas out there now
     
    #16 KoeiWarrior, Apr 17, 2012
  17. you should stop writing these crap stories that barely make any sense whatsoever.

    4-5 paragraph stories? I mean come on. I think Davy is an alt of yours too
     
    #17 d_bo_assassin, Apr 17, 2012
  18. @Koei or he could put in link from the Zelda series!!  (link is awesome!!)
     
    #18 *Bainsfire (01), Apr 18, 2012
  19. He isn't d_bo.Why do you insult anyway?
     
    #19 coldplay902, Apr 18, 2012
  20. First of all, you need a comma in 'He isn't d_bo'. Lacking a comma, that could be taken so that he is not d_bo (he's oh-so obviously not).

    Second, it might be an insult, but it's TRUE. D_bo might be harsh, but he says exactly what he thinks. And he has high standards.

    No, he does not come on here with the intention on ripping EVERYONE apart. In fact, he happened to like belle's story.

    Don't even tell me that he's being 'mean'. That is the most childlike behavior ever. I hear it from my classmates sometimes. Suck it up, darling, because life's 'mean'.
     
    #20 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Apr 18, 2012
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