Lost Memories

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *alicelovescookies (01), Dec 31, 2011.

  1. Lost Memories

    (Alarm rings)
    AHHH!summer is here!
    Hello everyone I'm Veronica but most people call me "Ronnie" I am 17 years old and goes to a private school...mainly because my parents want me to have a good education(parents these days...) Alot of people says that I'm a very smart and intelligent girl. Based from my friends I am quite popular in school. Many guys are in love with me but none of them is the Mr.Right guy. Today I woke up at 6:00am to curl my hair, paint my nails etc. My family is quite rich but I am a person who saves money and donate to the people in need. Basically I already have the things I need to survive...Today is the last day of school and I want it to be the best day of my life.
    Like usual I arrive to school at 8:00am sharp..talk with my friends, flirt with some cuties, and text to people. Since today was the last day of school every period I had was partying and chilling with the people around you absorbing every second as time passes. 20 seconds and we are free from school! Outside the hallways you can hear people say: CONGRATULATIONS class of 2010!! Or say have a great summer! 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1! I let out a relief knowing there would be no tests or homework to do. I had reached to her locker and my mom texted me and said "come home immediately we have to discuss something!"And I texted back, "but mom it's the last day of school!I have plans right now!" 10 seconds later mom said " I dont care come home now!"
    (At home)
    I arrived home at 3:30pm and when I entered my mom and dad was sitting on the couch telling me to sit with them. I said "Hi mom hi dad what's up?""Honey I know it's summer... But me and your dad is going on a business trip for 3 months and we want to send you over to your grandparents house during that time being..." After that I said "But mom I..." Mom interrupted and said "Sorry Veronica the decision has been made and you are going to Canada first thing in the morning no exceptions." I was shocked and didn't know how to react I started bursting in to tears! I mean who wants to spend their whole summer with their grandparents! "My life is so miserable why does it have to be me?" She said to herself "It's just a dream I'll just go take a shower and everything will be different..." Well it wasn't, after showering I heard my mom saying it's time for dinner! Mom said "Did you pack your clothes yet?" I said "No" Umm "how but your passport" I replied and said "No mom I don't even want to go!" "I know this is hard for you but your gramma and grandpa wants to see you it's only 3 months!" I didn't feel so good so I left.
    (in my room)
    I went on Facebook telling this to my friends...1 min later there was 5 posts saying "bring me souvenirs or have fun." I said to myself "Fun? I prefer school" unknowingly I dozed off to sleep right after I packed my luggages.
    (7:00am at the airport)
    "We are here sweetie! OH you still have 1 hour till the plane departs...Here some money for you to buy food if you are hungry!" I took the money and left... I finally found the number on where I was going to get on the plane and looked at my watch "Oh there's 45mins left! I'll just surf the Internet here." Suddenly this guy came and sat next to me he was quite hot and cute looking! I couldn't hold my self any longer so we chatted till it was time for me to go. I was on the plane realizing that I didn't ask him for his name but for some reason I knew I would see him again.
    (2:00pm in the car with my grandparents)
    I saw my grandparents based from the picture mom gave me and showed myself to them saying that I'm Ronnie. In the car gramma was saying "oh you are so beautiful you look just like your mom." And grandpa said "You are very tall and pretty what would you like for dinner?" I told grandpa that I didn't really mind. During the car ride I looked out thinking what unpredictable thing would happen to me. By the time we arrived I fell asleep...but they woke me up because they were too old to carry me. When I walked it to the house I felt very warm and cozy and this feeling I had never felt before... The feeling was like saying "I'm suppose to be here, this is where my life begins." I unpacked all my stuff, the room wasn't big but it wasn't small, but it was big enough for me to live in. I was tired so after dinner I showered and went to bed.
    (The next morning)
    I took a walk to the park and while walking there these childhood memories kept coming back and that one guy in my memory was so familiar... I opened my eyes and the guy I saw in my dream and the airport was there and his name was Jay. I had to go or else my gramma would be worrying about me and he insisted to walk me home. I went to the park every day for the past month now and relationship became and boy and girlfriends. He took me home everyday...but one particular day he didn't show up. Something happened I knew it...my gramma came in with a dog and said "This is for you a guy asked me to give this to you." He also gave me a letter and it said, " Ronnie I love you please forgive me I have some business to deal with and will come back but I don't know when. This dog saved my life please take care of him. He is untrained and rude but he has a heart please teach him well. His name is Charam, Good bye Ronnie." I was devastated and took the dog with me and cried the whole day.
    (The next day)
    I took Charam for a walk it was embarrassing but I did...every time Charam saw a person and tried to pet him, he would bite them or pee on them. I soon later found out his weaknesses and why he bit them. He bit them because when he was a puppy he was abused by them...he was scared when I asked him to come to me. Each day he improved he allowed me to bathe him, feed him, play fetch, and read to him. He was scared to sleep one day when there was a storm and from that day on wards he slept next to me.
    (The next morning)
    When I was eating my breakfast and my grandpa was reading the newspaper. On the front page of the letter it boldly said DOG BEAUTY PAGENT COMPETITION on June 20. I really wanted Charam to join and today was June 18, 2 days is more than enough to get Charam ready she thought. She bathed Charam, combed him, taught him tricks, and most importantly making him look beautiful. On the day of the competition I woke up early and took Charam to the stadium to get ready. The stadium was full when the show begin. I was extremely nervous when it was my turn to go, but out performance turned out really good. During the results I already knew that we has lost because of our competitors. When I was changing they were announcing second and third places and them receiving their medals and other awards. Right when we were going to leave they announced me and Charam as in first place. I was totally speech less and so was Charam. I thought I heard wrong but they said my name the second time. I got up there and received a medal and unknowingly they gave me a check worth 250 million dollars for the first place winner. In my heart I knew that Jay was there watching over me. If Charam was happy I was happy. Every moment I was with Charam I felt as if God planned this for me and he was there listening to my prayers and how yearned for him everyday wishing for Jay to come back.
    (1 month later)
    I woke up in a warm morning hearing my gramma say, "Ronnie wake up! Early bird catches the worm!" Every time she said that I would sleep 5 mins longer thinking what to do next. As usual I got dressed, ate breakfast, walked the dog, did my chores, and helped what ever my grandparents needed me to do. But for some reason Charam was acting all weird it was as is something good was going to happen to me, but I ignored it because I thought it wouldn't really matter. But that weekend something did happen it was seeing my gramma crying for my grandpa because he had died from a heart attack. My gramma crying broke my heart those child hood memories came back and she was always there for me when I was having problems. It was like she's my mom not the one from Arizona.
    (A day after the funeral)
    Me and my gramma was talking about grandpa and my memories. She finally told me what really happened in my life. During my first 7 years of life I was living in Canada till that one day... It was a stormy, windy day and my mom and me were coming back after grocery shopping. Well we never came back because we had collision with another car. My mom wasn't injured that bad but I was because the car struck on the right side of where I was sitting. I was bleeding heavily and the doctors thought I wouldn't make it. And if I did I wouldn't remember anything that had happened before the crash. There fore I was sent to Arizona to see if u could get healed and I did. My gramma also told me that she told the little boy that I played with that I was going away forever. She said that he looked devastated after she told him what happened. After that I said, "Gramma I saw Jay, in the airport and here and in those memories." After I said that I bursted in to tears. And the next day a miracle happened...
    (10:00am 2 weeks before she goes back to Arizona)
    "O yikes! I overslept!" I ate breakfast and placed the dog on his leash. I opened the door and saw Jay! We took a walk hand in hand... Of course I told him my memories and he said, "Hahaha! It's about time you remembered me!" I said look at Charam, I trained him so well! He did and said "You did" and at that moment he kissed me. My heart was beating like a marathon. In my head I said, "Yes this is my Mr.Right guy." The 2 weeks went by way too fast but it was time for me to go home. I gave back Charam and a letter to him I said, "You are the best thing that had happened in my life. Despite the tragic memories we had, we also made some very good ones these past months. I hope you will take care and visit my gramma and take the dog out regularly also. I really love you and I know we will meet again very soon." Love Ronnie.
    (The next day)
    It was the first day of school as a senior. And like every time a vacation ends the teachers would ask how their vacation was. And in each period I said "It was the best summer vacation EVER!" That year had passed by amazingly fast I had applied for many colleges. Of course they were all accepted based from my GPA and academics. But out of all those colleges I chose the one in Canada.
    (Two years later)
    I was in Starbucks drinking coffee and typing up my english essay. When suddenly a guy (Jay) "accidentally" spilled his drink on me. And from that moment on wards things just opened itself up expressing all the feelings in our heart and had lived together happily with their own little family.
    Plz comment on this story and improvements that I need to make. Thank you!
     
  2. beautiful story alice
     
  3. Omg continue and kip!:)
     
  4. Very good I liked it
     
  5. Okz I'll write more later
     
  6. It was very incoherent. I suggest you read the stickied guides.
     
  7. Wow hunter..U should be lurking..U shouldn't say anything if u have nothing good to say
     
  8. Bad format, decent storyline. Read my story "Friendship" and make a character in the sign up.
     
  9. Xander, no one likes you. Check my wall. And feedback is unconditional. It can be bad, good, or in-between.
     
  10. No one likes u except noobs
     
  11. You are a noob.
     
  12. Ppl that are ur friends are noobs
     
  13. Man dude..


    You talk to much
     
  14. Do you know what a noob is? A noob is a troll's cousin. You're both a noob, a newb, and a troll. That's not good at all.
     
  15. Ik what a noob is stupid
     
  16. Stupidity is something you know well.
     
  17. I apologize for the format...I didn't have the time to change it...hmm I'll do better next time
     
  18. The story is too long for me. I had to even eat Hawaiian bread for me to relief stress from long reads 
     
  19. Hey... Lex? This is soooo amazing!!!