The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Yea the non instantly puts it out of fiction. Feather you could request a section called 'feathers diary'? Or 'fan fiction thats non fictiony but actually kind of fiction cause the non dosnt metter'?
     
  2. Hold on, I wouldn't want to make your head explode from denial, here's a simpler explanation.

    Anything with "non" as a prefix is automatically NOT what the subject in the word is.

    For example:

    Nonsensical - Not sensical
    Nonvolatile - Not volatile
    Nonmusical - Not musical

    There, spare yourself the headache, Feather.
     
  3. Umm you just said it's non-fiction, so it is obviously not a form of fiction. Therefore, it should not be in the fan fiction area
     
  4. *Sits at cafe, drinking Writer's Rum, waiting for ideas to pop up.*
     
  5. *watches the FeatherHunter reputation meter plummet beyond the floor*

    Well, looky that.
     
  6. Considering the Devs deleted it...
     
  7. Oh dear...

    It's been a week...no wait, two.

    And now...this.

    Well, I think we all need a reminder of what this thread is supposed to be for. I recently received a request to repost this.

    Can you see me? Do you care?
    Can you see me as I stare?
    Looking at me as I cry.
    Looking at me eye to eye.

    Are you the only one that saw,
    How I was treated by the law?
    Are you the only one so kind,
    To let me put my past behind?

    You look at me like you can see,
    Every scar that's hurting me.
    Every word, the thoughts that stung,
    And the rope from where I'd hung.

    Can you see me, and my past?
    Do you hate me? Will that last?
    Can't you see my horrid end?
    And the hope no one would lend?

    I hope you never live to see,
    Everything they did to me.
    I hope you walk away right now
    And never ask the why or how.

    But because I know you will,
    And now I have all death to kill,
    I hope that you will live to tell,
    Why they tried sending me to hell.

    My story starts three years to date,
    When they had started all this hate.
    The law, it dictates write from wrong,
    And where and how I should belong.

    They thought that they knew everything,
    But they were wrong, them and the King.
    So I came in, I took a stand,
    And they backed me up across the land.

    But all too soon it crashed and burned.
    And through mistakes I sought to learn.
    I tried again, knew we might fail,
    But two years later, thought we'd prevail.

    I was so stupid, I see it now,
    But all the same, I wonder how.
    They learned my name, learned
    I tried,
    To overthrow them and their pride.

    They started hunting here and there,
    My name and face were everywhere.
    They took my friends and tortured them,
    And still I couldn't turn me in.

    And this is how the guilt devours
    All my heartless deathly hours,
    I thought if I would win the war,
    The pain would end forevermore.

    Again, I tell you, I was wrong.
    It was an act, me being strong.
    The resistance ended, all were caught,
    Including me. Then I was shot.

    They missed my heart by inches mere,
    And even though the pain would sear,
    I was alive. No more to say.
    'Cept I was murdered. Yesterday.

    Can you see me and forgive,
    Everything I did to live.
    I brought more rules down on you all.
    I only wanted them to fall.

    And this is why I say tonight,
    You have to try with all your might,
    Forget all now. All that I've said.
    Forget every tear I ever shed.

    And if you have this memorized,
    Every word. All my cries.
    Then I beg of you, keep this in sight,
    Tonight I tell you, keep the fight.

    All these laws must come to end,
    So maybe you'll be free again.
    And maybe then you can undo,
    Every wrong I brought to you.

    I'v told you everything save one,
    I've held it back since we'd begun,
    I am so sorry, I'd take it away.
    But I am dead. No more to say.

    6/27/11
     
  8. Wow. I must say that is truely impressive. There's something about longer, deeper poetry that appeals much more than smaller poems simply describing a single thing such as a scene or emotion. Thank you
     
  9. Yes wow irin thats amazing
     
  10. Right. Well, I'm just going to leave this small note to say I'm leaving the KaW forums. Maybe I'll see you people around some time

    Byes
     
  11. NÕŌOØÓÒÖÔOOOOOOOOOŒ!


    DØÑ’T ŸØŪ DÅRĘ!
     
  12. Thanks guys! Glad you liked it.

    And winters, you are not aloud to leave. Like, I'm going to superglue your feet to the floor.
     
  13. I'm torn between making a huge fuss and a goodbye thread or going quietly into the night... I'll probably go with the latter.
     
  14. I would leave KaW...


    Alas, I am stuck to the floor
     
  15. Irin,

    that was........... awesome *tear*
     
  16. Oh well. Since I'm silenced, and the forums have deteriorated to a big pile of crap, (INCLUDING YOUR THREADS FEATHER - YOU'RE NO BETTER), I quit KaW.

    G'bye!
     
  17. HURRAY! Finally, I won't have people always criticizing me. I won't have someone being so extremely detrimental whenever I post something. Being detrimental to Feather is now extraneous.

    Never fear, conspicuous is here.
     
  18. Seems Cheese seriously despises Feather.

    (not that I just realized it)