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I love that TV show! Do you know if theres going to be a new season? Anyway... Since it's a story not a movie you should put more description in. There isn't much so the reader can't visualize the setting. But I think you did somewhat capture the characters personalities. I could sorta imagine Merlin and Arthur saying what you wrote
Yeah. We were high on pixysticks (or lily would say we fed them to my dog) and ice-cream. Anyway thanks. There should be a new season. Lily and I were sitting around in my camper, an thought we should write about what happened to Morgana and Morgause (may have spelt wrong). I will b sure to add more detail.