The Unnamed Story (A Merlin Fanfic) Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Doctor_Fred_Weasley (01), Jul 10, 2011.

  1. Place all of your comments, suggestions, characters (when asked for), and constructive criticism here please. Thanks and happy writing.
     
  2. Is this by any chance based off of the BBC Merlin TV show?
     
  3. I love that TV show! Do you know if theres going to be a new season?

    Anyway...
    Since it's a story not a movie you should put more description in. There isn't much so the reader can't visualize the setting. But I think you did somewhat capture the characters personalities. I could sorta imagine Merlin and Arthur saying what you wrote
     
  4. Yeah. We were high on pixysticks (or lily would say we fed them to my dog) and ice-cream. Anyway thanks. There should be a new season. Lily and I were sitting around in my camper, an thought we should write about what happened to Morgana and Morgause (may have spelt wrong). I will b sure to add more detail.
     
  5. Cool I look forward to reading more
     
  6. It's good so far, though I doubt Arthur would be that stupid
     
  7. Thanks. This is just my interpretation of how Arthur would act in this situation
     
  8. Yeah I wrote most of this