Redemption Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Doctor_Fred_Weasley (01), Jun 4, 2011.

  1. Please give me constructive criticism, praise, or suggestions for redemption here. Thanks
     
  2. It's cool, I like the part about what's death and junk
     
  3. Thanks. I thought my friend Kelly would like it. She helped me come up with te idea