The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Can some one tell me what they think of my story? I'll post the beginning on here.
     
  2. It is called The Colosseum.

    Coralie's POV
    I opened my eyes. Slowly, all of my senses came back to me, as if they had been lost in the wind. First sight, and I saw the white room all around me. Then came taste, though I wish it could have waited, because all that I tasted was bile. Then smell, and hearing, and lastly, touch. Three faces peered over me, one a clean-shaven young man, one an older gentleman, and one a pretty blond woman. It was the woman who spoke.
    "Coralie," she said. "Welcome to the world."
     
  3. There is more on the actual thread for it.
     
  4. Is this your first fanfic
     
  5. Yea that's why I want some feedback
     
  6. idk wat to do for my story >.<
    theres gonna be some sort of prophecy...
    but idk who the main character is!
    should she be a princess?
    a normal girl with a big destiny?
    an archangel?
    a princess who is an archangel? (if so did she know she was archangel b4 she forgot everything?)
    a normal girl who doesnt know she is archangel?
    or something else?
    idk >.<
     
  7. YAY you know the proper place to post
     
  8. who me?
    of course i do lol
    ive been in fanfic for longer than u think
    i just lurk a lot in fanfic lol
     
  9. Darn you star... Lol

    Feather, you said something about editing the role? :/

    Reg writes? WTF OMGLOLBBQ RANDOM
     
  10. ya i write -.-
    ive been in high writing for the past 4 years -.-
    i luv writing and reading -.-
     
  11. Thats weird...

    Reg writes, and yet she doesn't care if FanFic is back or not.......

    MY VISION OF REALITY HAS BEEN FLIPPED 180°
     
  12. i want the stories and rps to live in harmony -.-
    u know nothing about wat i care about
    and also,
    THIS ISNT REAL!!!!
    i can still write
    we can ALL write
    and show our rl friends our stories
     
  13. Funny, how they CANNOT COEXIST.

    RP's took FF of Active Topics.

    If you want them to coexist, MOVE RPS SOMEWHERE ELSE.

    FanFic hater
     
  14. They can coexist if we TRY
    instead, everybody is taking sides and arguing.
    And we didn't take it off AT.
    Haters like you took it off AT

    Rp hater
    Peace hater
     
  15. I'm afraid I agree with cheese.And actually, I think remove it from AT made it worse.

    No AT = Less Haters = More people making RP
     
  16. actually, a lot of RPs died when it was removed from AT.
    And we didn't ask for it to get moved. It got moved because of the haters.
    Maybe if there had been one less hate thread... just one less... thinkgs would have been different.
    Maybe if cheese hadn't made that hate thread...
    *sigh*
    And Star, I remember you were in three RPs, the same ones I was/am in.
     
  17. I want to be able to read my stories and KNOW WHEN THEY'RE BEING UPDATED!
     
  18. No offense regram but i don't think it was because of haters. It was because RP's are being posted on a lot therefore always putting it AT. Dunno why the devs decided it was a problem though....
     
  19. just CHECK THE FF THREAD LIKE I DO
    how come i know when the stories r updated?
    JUST TRY HARDER
    and stop blaming us, cuz it was partially ur fault too cheese.
    u made hate threads.
    u used to rp
    u tried to come back but when we didnt like how op u were u had a tantrum and now u r trying to destroy us all.