Not done Vengeance I put on the armor and gauntlets and asked:who are you?!? She replied :my name is claw. You will be known as flame. Your friend is dead we must leave.I then replied: what the hell are those things?she replied there is no time. Devin's body started to move and she shot him with her bow which seemed to appear out of nowhere.NOW, she yelled I followed. She took me to a huge house where I heard her yell: AQUA open the door!!!!A small girl opened the door and claw led me in. In side looked like one of those future houses. I tooled them how this happened to me and they both said the same thing happened to them. Then they showed me the way to kill many crawlers and chasers (the thing Philip turned into)and then I got used to going out all alone to save the survivors. I found one his name was Leo...
This isn't even a second part of your so called "book" What you've written so far could be discribed as maybe a chapter....MAYBE