Ace99 just got kaw and so iv only jusr read the first to pages of this forum but ur story sounds like it will be brilliant and I can't wait to read more good luck writting it!
Out Cheek out my book: Hell rising My name is Patrick, my life basically ended when he returned...His name was Phillip he was my freind until today.The day started out as a normal day, I got dressed and walked to the bus. As usual I got on, but somthing was different. My freind all said :Hi are you the new student?I countered :No I know all of you stop messing around. "we don't know you." "but I know all of you" Then I list there names, and that is when my life changed for good... Entree.II The roof of the bus was torn of by what looked like a chicken with a bad hair due. But no one appeared to see, I was taken aback. The thing appeared to have three eyes all red, glaring right at me. I tried to not look so it wouldn't see that it was me, but as if it could read my mind like a book, it swooped down and grabbed me. I could think of a million things I would rather due then be lifted out of my bus bye a over grown chicken. Entree.III Oh god I thought why is it always me, I get bullied, I have my homework stolen, I get kidnaped by a chicken,A CHICKEN of all the things a chicken. Wait...Its a harpy. We flew every where, but we stopped, and the harpy got someone else...Oh my lord I thought as I recognize my x-best friend Philip...He flailed and screamed as we got closer to our target. We where going to the grand canyon. When we arrived we were brutally dropped. As we free fell I felt lighter as we neared the floor. Entree.IV When we hit the floor I felt dead, but I felt like I was still falling. Maybe after you die u feel the same way for eternity,but this time I hit water, or what seemed to be water it was warm and thick. I thought I was going to pass out when I learned what it was. It was blood, blood of the ones lost here. I saw a skull then I saw Phillip lying on the ground. I was the lucky one, Phillip was dead... Entree.V I wander what seemed like a millennia, until I found a light. I walked towards the light.As I got closer to the light I saw movement. I heard a low,long moan,I thought it was someone else trapped in this eternal waste land...but I saw it was Philip, I went to talk to him on how to get back when he charged me.I saw something different in his eyes not just was one missing but the other one was yellow. As I freaked out not knowing what was wrong with him. Entree.VI I grabbed the nearest bone, witch happened to be a spine and cut a gash in the monster. A then ran to the light of the "cave".When I got there I saw I was at the top of grand canyon. I turned to see Philip running at me. All I did was move and watch as he plummeted to the bottom of the Grande canyon. I thought:I need to get out of here... Sry I'm not done In
He catches his breath. "No, I played the Bolero of Fire. It took me to a volcano. I was only there for around a minute, but I guess there was a travel delay.
Reg heard the action from inside the wall. She comes out of her secret room and looks around. She walks up to Liz and puts her hand on Liz's forehead. "Uh oh..." she mutters. "Liz, you've got a small case of Magical cold!" Reg runs over to her book and flips it to the magical diseases section. "Dragon Pox... Fairy Fever.... Oh here it is! Magic Cold!" Reg starts running around the kitchen and grabbing random ingredients. She puts them into a blender and makes a smoothie out of them. Instead of looking brown and chunky, like random item smoothies usually do, the mixture was pale blue and if you looked really closely, you could see it sparkling. She gave the potion to Liz. "Here, this should make you feel better," explained Reg.
lmao u got me the violent princess luvs poisoning ppl :lol: srsly, make a REAL charazter :lol: :lol: :lol: