The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. out

    WEN DID MY HEART STOP BEATING???
    lol

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  2. Out

    dont make me stop it again  just go already I've had 4 massive packets of M&M's im impatient 

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  3. out

    lol ok
    YUM M&MS

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    Reg's body has a spasm. Her eyelids flutter open. "Did it work?" she asks faintly.
     
  4. "reg can you explain to me what is going on?"
     
  5. "well your talking" David replies casually
     
  6. -out-

    My guys name is zak, just saying
     
  7. Redelle scolds herself for being so clumsy and sprints over to David and Reg.
     
  8. Reg tries to roll her eyes, but fails. She doesn't have enough energy to even do that simple action.
    "I meant... did the ritual work?" she asked between coughs. "And.. who interupted... it?"
     
  9. "well....er.... I did" David replies guiltly....
     
  10. David looks up at redbelle, "better?"
     
  11. Raising an eyebrow, Redelle sighs, still trying to process the information and anxious to find her sword.
     
  12. "WHAT" shrieked Reg, her energy suddenly back. "Why did you interrupt it? And kil me? And how? Your spirit was inside the necklace?" Reg is used to David's tricks and plans, but she still hates them.
     
  13. David's eyes down cast he says "I'm in love, that's all, it just so happened I had to do it...you'd of died... Well for a longer time if I didn't... Forgive me?"
     
  14. "Fine, I forgive you," says Reg.
     
  15. "well I just got here so... I can't answer" mentioned zak
     
  16. Reg didn't have time to think about what David just said before she heard a boom outside. "Not again! She's getting stronger! tHE RItual should've destroyed her for longer!"
     
  17. -out-

    I sent that way to late cuz I'm lazy lol

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  18. Redelle cringes as she hears the boom too. She really wishes she had her sword as her fingers continue to twitch.
     
  19. Reg throws the sword at Redelle, and Redelle catches it without realizing it.