I have decided to write a story about Werewolves and Vampires. please be nice to me I'm a starting writer! Fangs Chapter 1 Ash stood up, shaking dust out of her cream fur. “Nice try, Bro.” she grinned. “But I’m still the champ!” Chance growled. “Yeah, but I’m still older and next in line for Alpha! So there!” He turned, but a quick blow to his side from his sister turned him back around. “Come on- we need to keep training. The vamps took out the entire Pack of Running water on their own- we need to be ready if they come for us.” Ash’s eyes were the only things that betrayed her fear, and Chance gave her a reassuring glance, and got back into his fighting stance. “Ready to lose?” he said, eyes gleaming. “Nope! But you should be!” Ash cackled, and launched herself towards the darker cream male. She swiped at his face, knocking his open jaws aside. Turning, she hit him squarely on the side, knocking him to the ground. Chance managed to get a couple of good kicks, but Ash continued to hold him down. Finally he gave up, going limp. Ash was stepping off of him when their mother’s howl reached their ears. “Ashlyn? Chance? Oh no, where are they? Inga probably sent Katara after them… oh no!” Ash growled. “I hate it when she calls me that!” Turning, she faced Chance. “But why would she worry that Katara was after us? She’d only be that afraid if Vampires were attacking the camp-Oh my god.” She looked at Chance. “Vamps at camp. We need to get over there!” she turned and raced off, not waiting for an answer. Chance followed her trail through the thick forest, traveling the path they had used this morning. When he reached the camp, a horrible sight meet his eyes. Dead werewolves, some in human form, some in wolf, littered the grass. Multiple ravens were sitting on every corpse, eyes gleaming an evil red. Only three living bodies could be seen- Ash, Chance’s mother, and Inga, leader of the Vampires. Inga was waving a large knife around, the blade glinting silver. He shuddered- that was how so many were dead-Inga had a pure silver knife. Howling, he threw himself into the fray, knocking his mother aside. He racked his claws down Inga’s face, thankful for the hours of practice Ash had made him do. Inga raised her arm and hurled the knife, barely missing Ash’s head. A howl of pain made Chance turn. The knife had missed Ash, but it was buried deep in the flesh of his mother. He howled grief in his voice. Ash, turned to face him, and he was struck with fear. When her eyes had landed on their mother, he saw flames that seemed to leap from Ash’s eyes. She turned, and fought with renewed energy. Inga was weakened, and Ash drove her out of camp, biting at her ankles. Ash stopped at the edge of their territory, and turned to Chance, who had followed her. “What will we do now?” her voice was horse from suppressed tears. Chance rubbed up against her. “We’ll sit here for as long as it takes for someone to realize that most of our pack is gone. We can see if we can join their pack then. But for now, just stay here and keep a look out. I’m going to see how many Vamps are still in camp” he turned, his fur matted with blood. Ash sighed, and rested her head on her paws. Perking her ears, she listened for any wolves nearby. The noise from the Pack of Falling Stars seemed the closest, so she honed in on them. They had lots of wolves, but plenty of room for two more. There was an Alpha male already, but no Beta female, so Chance might have to be an Omega. She laughed at the thought of an Alpha’s son being an Omega. The Alpha female seemed kind, as she was always smiling. Listening, she heard someone call her Luna. The dark Alpha male was strong, and she heard Luna call him Dominic. The medicine wolf looked a little physco, but she did her job well. Apparently her name was Nila. Ash zoomed out, focusing on the patch of land she was sitting in. it was one of the more prey deprived spots in their land, but it would support two wolves for a while. She turned, hearing footsteps, and saw Chance pad out from the undergrowth. “The camp is gone to us,” he said. “No Vamps left, but they made sure to destroy it well after we left.” Ash sighed. “I found a pack we could join. The Pack of Falling Stars.” Ash laughed suddenly. “I just realized that you’re the Alpha male of the Pack of Silver Moonlight, and I’m the beta female. Fun!” Sarcasm was thick in her voice. “We’ll be okay. I promise.” Chance lay down next to her, smiling. “Get some sleep. I’ll take first watch.” Ash mumbled her thanks, and settled down. Shutting her eyes, she was asleep instantly. Chance sat up, his eyes glued to the horizon, as if hoping rising sun would fix it all. He sighed, and turned back to the border of the now destroyed land of the Pack of Silver Moonlight. Yay! I hope you liked it! Please tell me wht you thought!
It's good but it could be better but all together I wouldn't mind reading it you should try to get it published if you ever finish it and who us inga sorry for asking
sorry I fail at intros Inga is the lead Vampire of the pack that keeps attacking all the wolves. Katara is her right hand woman.
Ok thanks but so people know who the chrecters are put a list of charecters who they are what they are and what they do at the front of the book before the first chapter tgat helps alot it helped in ink heart and tgat book was great
Character chart- Ash- Cream female with grey paws, Chance's sister. Beta female in the Pack of Silver Moonlight. While in human form Ash has a knive on her side at all times. Chance- Dark cream male with grey streaks. Ash's brother. Alpha male of the Pack of Silver Moonlight. Inga- Lead Vampire. Tall with red hair with geen streaks. Likes a blue and white polo and jeans. Evil. (No duh! lol) Loves her silver knife. Katara- Second in command Vampire. Short with long blond hair. I will update this as the story goes on!
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I know it's really short, but chappie three is being typed as we speak! Yay!!!! Chance glanced up. It had been three days since Inga, the lead Vampire, had torn his pack to bits. He and his sister, Ashlynn, were the only survivors. They had staked out near the border of his land, hoping for help. But they had been waiting far too long. They needed to go rouge-it was their last hope. He padded over to where Ash was sleeping. Panic flooded his body-she wasn’t there. Trying to think straight, he put his nose to the ground and found her scent trail. He followed it to a large sandy clearing near their border with the Pack of Falling Stars. Ash was standing there, claws out, staring at two wolves Chance didn’t recognize. He could tell by their scent, however, that they were Alphas. He stepped in front of Ash. “State your business.” His eyes narrowed. He raised his head to show his status. The Alpha female’s eyes widened in concern. “Where is the rest of your pack?” Ash growled. “Dead.” She spat, her eyes the only thing that showed her pain. The Alpha male gazed sympathetically. “What happened?” “Inga happened.” Ash’s normal fierce demeanor had returned. The Alpha female glanced at her mate. “That’s the third one this moon…” she seemed to ask him something with her eyes for he shook his head. She cocked her head, begging, and he sighed and seemed to give in. Stepping forward, he said to Chance “I, the alpha of the Pack of Falling Stars, invite you to join my pack.” Chance raised an eyebrow. This could work. He walked over to Ash, who had a knack for reading emotions. “What are you getting from them?” he muttered in her ear. “The male seems cautious, but he’s willing to get new members for his pack. And the female-she really wants us, and I think…”Ash paused. “I think she loves you.” Cliffie!!! Yay me! Enjoy!
Hi guys... So I've been failing at updating I'm really sorry!! I will try and get the next chappie typed up by next week!!! Yay!!