Kingdoms At War=The Story(Discussion/Feedback) Thread

Welcome to Kingdoms At War: The Story(Discussion/Feedback) Thread!

This thread is purely for feedback/discussion connecting to a Fan Fiction Story called "Kingdoms At War: The Story. It contains all the chapters/parts plus some extra information about things you may need to know about the Fan-Fictional World of Kaw!

Before I describe more about this question/feedback thread, here are the links to the story below.
First, it will be the opening to start the story.

Kingdoms At War: The Story(Dev approved)

After reading the Dev approved part, if you are interested in reading the story here are the links again:

Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 1)(Published October 25, 2014, 10:09 PM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 2)(Published November 2, 2014, 7:32 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 3)(Published November 9, 2014, 8:22 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 4)(Published November 16, 2014, 7:29 AM)

Medical Class Kingdom: Profile (this is after Part 4)(Published November 16, 2014, 9:07 AM)

Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 5) (Published November 23, 2014, 8:41 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 6) (Published November 30, 2014, 7:39 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 7) (Published December 7, 2014, 8:11 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 8) (Published December 14, 2014, 9:24 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 9) (Published December 21, 2014, 8:16 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 10) (Published December 28, 2014, 8:50 AM)

Epic Battle(T6): Kangen The Punisher (Published January 2, 2015, 3:04 PM)

Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 11) (Published January 4, 2015, 8:26 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 12) (Published January 11, 2015 8:05 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 13) (Published January 18, 2015, 2:15 PM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story(Part 14)(Published February 18, 2015, 7:39 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 15) (Published September 17, 2015, 12:41 PM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 16) (Published September 21, 2015, 5:12 PM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 17) (Published September 28, 2015, 6:23 PM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 18) (Published October 23, 2015, 9:18 PM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 19) (Published November 4, 2015, 10:22 AM)
Kingdoms At War: The Story (Part 20) (Published November 13, 2015, 10:06 AM). (Full version available)

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Kingdoms At War: The Story (Bonus Episode 1) (Published March 28, 2017, 9:37 PM)

Kingdoms At War: The Story (Bonus Episode 2) (Published April 5, 2017, 2:51 PM, NEW)
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Any players can make replies to this thread as long as it is related to Kingdoms At War: The Story.
They can not only discuss the story with other readers on this thread, but also give feedback to me if needed.

Please be noted that this thread is about Kingdoms At War: The Story (Fan-Fiction).
Thank you, Kawers and have fun discussing the story and giving feedbacks!

All efforts and ideas poured to write on this thread are fictional and are NOT meant to exist in the REAL game that we players play! (as I never emailed support about it)

By:
A kaw player, sean893

 

Which part is it that you are unclear about?

 

In which part of the story?
There are 4 parts here.

If you mean the whole book, it's currently not open for rating since I have not released ALL the parts yet.
Plus, rating should be written in orange!

 

Hormi, your rate is accepted!
This is how rating is done! I will be putting this into my records soon!

 

Bump for PeanutButterJelley and Rusted_Knight_Of_Serenity!

P.S=I am very sorry for about Part 9, I tried to insert in the URL to this thread but Daphnia locked it way too fast! I hadn't finished constructing my thread!

But no faults to Daphnia, please! She's just trying to help me out so that all feedbacks can be gathered on one single thread! Thank you!

 

All accepted!!