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Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:27pm

I was told I should create a thread for these. Plz take the time to read them. And tell me what you think. I'll update as I think of them.
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:28pm

Here's the 1st one


  When we leave this plane of exsistance we try to leave behind a legacy or a memory of some great deed either of good or evil. When we move on we will always leave a mark, a mark of what we've done and acomplished. Wether it's a path of destruction, or a movement of selflessness, something is left behind for the world to learn from. People will always seek imortality in any form they find most pleasing to them.

  We're always looking for the dare to be great feeling, a feeling of acceptance in our lives. Some find this extrodanary feeling while the majority are left In the dust losing sight of what matters. Those people end up losing sight of their dreams just because they gave up.  Though on occasion someone comes along offering guidance. It could be a path of financial help, spirtual help, or even physical guidance, eventually someone will offer a hand wether we ask for it or not. No matter what happens in life, ALWAYS look for those willing to asist you on your journey in life. Those people could be anyone from a family member or a complete stranger passing by.

  If you ever find yourself doubting your judgement or feeling like the world would be better off without you, think again. There are many people around you who learn from you and look up to you for guidance. You may not realize it at all, but you do make a differance in many ways. 
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby *wrecks (01) on Dec 8 2009, 8:30pm

To that's a dope peom and so true that's deep
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:30pm

Thx I have more. I'll post
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:32pm

Here's the 2nd one


Off-track and confused
Wondering which direction to go
Questioning past decicions
Hoping they were right
Asking myself what to do
Waiting for my answer
Lost in darkness
Trying to find a sliver of light
Calling out silently
To someone for guidence
Quietly wishing for a little hope
Never sure what will show
Feeling cold and empty
Searching for myself
Hoping the end of my struggle
Is close to an end
Just as those befor us
Searching for global love
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:33pm

Some poems won't really ryme. But I tried
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby *Bayboy (01) on Dec 8 2009, 8:34pm

Poems don't have to rhyme
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:35pm

I know here's the 3rd


Lost without direction
Searching but unsure for what
Pondering the unimaginable
Wondering the impossible
Asking what tomorrow will bring
Questioning every thought that passes through my mind
Contemplating what others will think of me
Unsure what I am doing in life and where I will end up
Seeking someone that understands my delima
Hoping I will find myself 
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:37pm

The 4th


There is a time in everyones life where we feel lost and unsure what our heading is. We may think we are alone and that no one knows how we feel, but we must realize everyone has been through this phase. Maybe not as severe or the same problem. What I am talking about is Depression, it happens to all of us no matter how old you are. For everyone the symptoms differ. It may develop through stress or it might be genetic. Ether way you are not alone, no matter what you think there are people around you ready and waiting to help you through your journey. All you have to do is look around, it could be a friend, family member, or just take a look around. 
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby *wrecks (01) on Dec 8 2009, 8:39pm

Gotta say normally i don't like poetry but this is really good it shows the point very well and it's easy to get very beautiful better then the crap I'm reading in school
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