"Disaster" original poem

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Static, Apr 8, 2017.

  1. "Disaster"



    Been awhile since Ive written
    So lemme go & spin a tale.
    When all stability has crumbled,
    you merely dwell inside this hell.

    There's fire all around you
    Everyone you love is burning up.
    Tears streaming down your cheeks,
    you thought you were turning tough.

    So you grab everyone you can
    And attempt to navigate the blaze.
    Pillars are falling all around you,
    hot smoke suffocates your face.

    You dont think about the pain yet
    and dont believe you're gonna make it.
    Right when you feel you cannot take it
    You feel your feet hit the pavement!

    You have made it through the house,
    somehow swallowing all dread!
    You turn to look upon your family,
    But all your followers are dead.

    You still feel the flames
    This time the heat is at your back.
    Your whole city is engulfed,
    And you see craters from attacks!

    The whole sky is darkened
    Everything is burning in the streets
    You hear missles screech by
    Screaming, as if learning they can speak.

    And then the horror hits you,
    suspended shock & plenty more.
    Everything around you is destroyed
    And its the consequence of war.
     
  2. This poem is a good one static 
     
  3. Thx bud :lol:
     
  4. Is this a poem or a vision of America under Trump?
     
  5. Epic static buddy
     
  6. Thx boss & Fire.

    Yea things are getting wild so had to attempt a tale equally as disastrous. Nobody wants a missile in their living room.
     
  7. Amazing as always!
     
  8. Very nice literature piece Static.
    Thanx for sharing :)

    Let me thank you in kind.

    A piece I wrote on Depression for my other half to attempt to describe his struggle with it.
    Hope you like :)

    -
    I am unending & unrelenting.
    I am infinite & ultimate.
    I am a madness, left over from countless creations.
    I am the ice cold chill apon the neck of the universe, stealing its breath.

    I am the Mother of Fear,
    The Father of Nightmares,
    & Creator of all things Monstrous.
    I am the Grandfather of Death.

    I am The Darkness,
    And have existed always.

    You cannot escape me,
    You cannot fight me,
    You cannot reason with me.

    I will consume everything,
    And leave nothing.

    I am The Darkness,
    And have existed always.
    -
     
  9. is that a poem about the mods?
     
  10. A genuine beauty
     
  11. Good one, you da best
     
  12. Nice Static
     
  13. Seems where things are headed
     
  14. Oh boy better get the comfort dogs out.....because the weeping has already started before anything else.