Poems.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by etak, Jul 20, 2011.

  1. Ok I have Decided to
    Make this thread because fanfic Is getting full of different threads for poems and taking up too much space.
    I was looking in a box and I found this poem I made when I was ten:

    Sadness.

    Sadness is blue, like a big rain cloud,
    It sounds like the rain, thundering down,
    Like a large looming cave, with an echoing sound,
    Like sailing on the blue blue sea, with no land for miles around,
    Torments your mind, and breaks your heart,
    A terrible thing that tears you apart.
    Like being stung by a thousand stingers,
    The only emotion that forever lingers.



    Please use this thread instead of making new ones,

    Etak
     
  2. Also please post feedback on the poem.
     
  3. When I look at you
    The stars in the world shine
    For they know
    That you are the one
    For me


    <3
     
  4. V.good poems
     
  5. Im gonna call you Kate
     
  6. Because etak is Kate backwards.
     
  7. This poem was written by a friend of mine.

    ----------See the tears
    -----------Across your
    -------------Cheek

    --------Makes my knees
    ----------Feel soft and
    -------------Weak

    ----------Hold you tight
    -----------Against my
    --------------Chest

    ----------To you I'll give
    -------------My final
    --------------Breath

    Poet: KaraLyn Black
     
  8. A nonsense/ditty poem

    When I was 1,
    I shuffled on my bum,
    And sucked my thumb .

    When I was 2,
    I got my first shoe.

    When I was 3,
    I cut my knee.

    When I was 4,
    I knocked on the door.

    When I was 5,
    I was eaten alive.

    When I was 6,
    I had my first wheatabix,

    When I was 7,
    I was 7 going on 11.

    When I was 8,
    I was grate,

    When I was 9,
    I found my first Diam.

    When I was 10,
    I saw Big Ben.

    When I was 11,
    I fell into heaven.


    By Sandy2000
     
  9. Has old guy with club^ I love poems but sadly I can't make them =( I'm a failure
     
  10. My dream guy:

    Someone who is there for me right or wrong
    Someone who doesn't give up when I say leave me alone
    Who truly loves me
    Who is reaching out a hand when mine is out to reach
    Someone who says goodnight and morning to me
    But wait....








    This person isn't just a dream he's a dream come true

    Love you huskers :)
     
  11. I cnt write poems srry
     
  12. This is why I dont tell peeps what I've wrote ^