For the Love of Cookies Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Mar 24, 2011.

  1. Please post all feedback here! All criticism is welcome.

    Story Thread

    FOR THE LOVE OF COOKIES
     
  2. Wow. Now I'm truly frightened
     
  3. Well... it certainly is original. Wow...
     
  4. Strange... I thought I say another thread like this?
     
  5. @Mystique yes isn't it terrifying?Can u image a world without cookies? It's very scary(lol)
    @Kimber yeah it's really different, i don't think many ppl would do it...i don't even know what genre it is...But I hope it's original in a good way!
    @Razor hmmm idk, I've never seen any other thread with this title.
     
  6. I do indeed think I am excited to see how this unique story goes that would be cool I am to tired to punctuate sorry
     
  7. Ty lady :) Kill should be writing chapter 1. Lol sometimes no punctuation is cool :)
     
  8. I love it (and of course I'm not gonna onesided ;) )
     
  9. Lol thanks, I can't wait to see your part
     
  10. Eeeeep! Death by milkshake? GRASS FLAVORED?!?!
     
  11. It's so terrorifying
     
  12. Cookies make you FAT umpa umpa umpa de du
     
  13. Not exercising enough or overeating/stuffing will make you fat as well. Eating only one cookie doesn't make much difference, and please don't make up words or no one will understand you.(which might be a good thing for us.)
     
  14. No foods will actually make you fat. It's what you do once you've eaten them. E.G Being lazy, not exercising etc.
    Basically what Stora said
    Therefore your statement is flawed and me and Stora win ^.^
     
  15. I'm slightly crazy after being locked in that cage for 2-3 years. That's where sick ideas like death by milkshake is from. :oops: Wasn't meant to tell you that

    Jkjk
     
  16. New post!
     
  17. I'm cba to actually read it, but looks good from the title (I'm only here on the holidays e.g. Mothers day, Christmas and my birthday :)
     
  18. Karl! Read it! Be asked to read it! And please stay! Not on and off