This is the feedback thread for my story, Darkness Ascending. Feel free to post your opinion, wether you think the story is good or bad, here! Also, I would be grateful for any suggestions!
thanx! to tell u the truth idk where its going lol i just improvising whenever i have a random idea and inspiration i put it in for example, yesterday i had a random idea for an interesting thing to put in my story SPOILER ALERT :twisted: (insert a prophecy here) The prophecy was written in blood. How do I know all this? It was written in my blood. (end of chapter or end of book depends if i making it a seies or book idk lol) i havent even thought of a prophecy yet lol
lol thx and wen i nto thinking of random stuff like that i have writer's block like i think of the middle but not beggining or end or end but not middle or beginning lol usually theres this awesome part and then the rest is mediocre
lol boys r so stupid they have no appreciation for good literature! the second they hear "blood" or something they r interested :roll:
Actually no I read all posts on writers cafe in less than an hour and I can read 100 pages in an hour. I like reading. U underestimate us boys. Not all of us r crazily into gore and smashing things up. My friend reads 10 hours total in a week
Okay. Oh by the way I'm going to start writing short stories from TN3U to keep our memories. It'll hopefully be interesting. Right now I'm writing Destruction if TN3U. :-| :geek:
i was gonna do that >.< lol w/e i bust with Darkness Ascending anyway and also pls suggest a new title cuz Darkness Ascending is only temporary cuz i needed a title to post in FF and Darkness Ascending sounds cool lol
lol At first i was gonna call ti The Dolls and then i thought "nah the dolls rnt very important" u know wat? i just gonna keep it Darkness Ascending lol