THE FINAL FLAME FEEDBACK AND DISCUSSION

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. Well i just posted the first part of the story. Hope you liked it. Feel free to wall me ideas! Or even post them here!
     
    #1 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  2. Great start Cro! Btw to do underline it's just the letter u.
     
    #2 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  3. :D yay!!! Love it
     
    #3 *akai41 (01), Jan 9, 2011
  4. Lol it was a big fail!
     
    #4 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  5. ooo lala someone has a little romance goin on
     
    #5 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  6. Lol fh u cant say anythin! What bout ur story?
     
    #6 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  7. Pish posh that kiss on the cheek meant nothing or the time i said she was…or that other time when I said she had…
    Oh shut up cro
     
    #7 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  8. It wasn't that bad Cro, though u might want to leave space between scene changes.
     
    #8 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  9. Fh- lol exactly!
    Stora- ty i was readin over it and was thinkin that

    Well guys i gotta sleep now. So ill cya tomorrow and ill post another chapter
     
    #9 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  10. Yay so happy u used Alexa!!!!!!! And she's awesome!!!!!!
     
    #10 *akai41 (01), Jan 9, 2011
  11. That seemed extremely ranndom
     
    #11 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 9, 2011
  12. Sry... Just happppppyyyyyy!!!!
     
    #12 *akai41 (01), Jan 9, 2011
  13. What ever cro lol
     
    #13 FeatherHunter, Jan 10, 2011
  14. Love the newest part!
     
    #14 *akai41 (01), Jan 10, 2011
  15. I can't say anything else but very good!
     
    #15 Storallelite, Jan 10, 2011
  16. A liitle to sudden on the power thing!
     
    #16 FeatherHunter, Jan 10, 2011
  17. Quite a big chapter 3 just posted!!
     
    #17 Croluxian, Jan 10, 2011
  18. :) good
     
    #18 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 10, 2011
  19. Sorry i meant chapter 2
     
    #19 Croluxian, Jan 10, 2011
  20. Great post cro
     
    #20 Storallelite, Jan 10, 2011
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