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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. #1 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  2. Very intresting. I like it so far. Post more soon!
     
    #2 *Irin (01), Jan 9, 2011
  3. Thx I'm thinking of how I'll be incorporating people into the story any ideas?
     
    #3 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  4. Mysterious prologue! I like it
     
    #4 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  5. Thx
     
    #5 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  6. TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES!!!!
     
    #6 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  7. Please be aware that this is my FIRST FANFIC so I'm sorry for all the mistakes!!!CHAPTER One: Part One is up!!
     
    #7 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  8. I need a break my posts are horrible right now…deep breathing classes is what I should take for this lol!
     
    #8 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  9. Keep calm feather, here are a few tips: Don't post directly to KaW! Never do it! Post in notes(or word doc if on PC) first then copy and paste.
    Makes it easier to edit. And if u have a PC, link ur account(if u haven't done so already) and u can delete/edit posts that were already posted.
    And be careful with viewpoints
     
    #9 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  10. I agree with stora even tho i never have the time to write storie
     
    #10 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  11. Did you really forget me? Really?

    I was spending time with friends and family, and you don't even put a character in for me?

    SHAME

    I don't care what it is, as long as they're male and have some sort of advanced arrow, machine gun
     
    #11 cheesemuffin, Jan 9, 2011
  12. @Stora and Irin
    Thx for all the advice I used it on chapter 1 part 2…which reminds me…

    CHAPTER ONE: PART 2 IS UP!!!!!!
     
    #12 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  13. That was a good chapter. Insightful but easy to read. This jakoria girl.... One i end up with? I always get the beautiful girl in the stories lol
     
    #13 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  14. No you don't end up with Jatoria, someone will though…
     
    #14 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  15. Jatoria?
     
    #15 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  16. Yes!! I'm pretty and a queen! Lol
    It's very good, I like how u use italics to show thoughts.
     
    #16 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  17. Yea same here
     
    #17 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  18. Lol thx!!

    PART 2 and a half of Chapter One is up


    Irin will be in the spotlight next and possibly cheese!!
     
    #18 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  19. Lol thx!!

    PART 2 and a half of Chapter One is up


    Irin will be in the spotlight next and possibly cheese!!
     
    #19 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  20. Awwwwe no room for German? :'(
     
    #20 german_idiot, Jan 9, 2011
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