Hi this is my first story and I'm writing on iPod so if their is any spelling mistakes it's the small key board! Thank you DONT POST ON THIS THREAD LOOK AT THE FEEDBACK PAGE THANK YOU Chapter one - Growing up This is the village of the great hero to be Skarin and his lover Danni. They do not know it yet, but a great adventure is beginning and this is where it starts. Skarin lives in the small village of Erya which is under control of the empire, the last of the human's realm after their failed attempts of domination. They are now allies with the Elves and dragons, But hel and the Orcs are sworn enemies of the empire. Now onto the story. Skarin is a very odd 16 year old boy, he has brown curly hair with dark green eyes and a short button nose. Skarins life so far has been a nightmare and is in shambles. His father was killed in the last great war and his mother well she is always drunk. Skarin looks out for himself, but does have one true friend, Henley, his 10 month old working cocker. Chapter two - The call "HELLO ANYONE LIVE HERE??" Skarin awoke from his slumber to the sound of the door being nearly broken in two. He quickly changed into his work clothes and answered the door. Their stood a rather short girl with dark red hair. She looked around Skarins age and had a massive grin on her face. She tried speaking too fast and ended up mixing up words "you're... At... Wanted... Castle... King..." "Slow down catch your breath" replied Skarin "NO TIME" she yelled grabing Skarins arm and pulling him towards the castle. The village was just outside the main city and Skarin and the mysterious girl reached the castle quickly. "The king seeks your presence in the main hall" She said as she pushed him towards the main doors. The doors slammed open with a bang and the king yelled "Get him!!!" As soon as he said this several soldiers held Skarin and dragged him forwards. "Soldiers leave me, and this THING alone" he roared. Skarin was dumbfound why was he here? He'd done nothing wrong and kept to himself most of the time. "You Skarin sorry about that, I have to maintain my standard as a fair, but harsh ruler thank you for your patience" "Your kingliness, may i ask, why am I here?" Skarin asked "Argh, I was hoping you knew, when you are angry or happy do you get a weird feeling in your blood?" "Um, now you ask, I do" Skarin replied "Now tell me what you feel" "I feel like fire, water, air and earth are my slaves and will do what I want" "ok I know now what you are" "What?" "You are an elemental, a person who can control the very earth we walk on or the water we drink" "Whoa, How do I use this power" "With care and training, you will travel with Danni, my daughter" Skarin leaves for his house with dreams in his head.
Chapter 2 The call part 2 The moon was high in the sky and Skarin had just left the castle. The guards in their red uniforms stood guard to the entrance. The pale blue moonlight shone on Sharkins face and then he felt it. The elements surge through his blood. Only the red headed girl stood in his way. She ran up to him with the cheesy grin she had about, but Skarin didn't have time to think before she was right infront of him. He then looked at the face of the girl he had barely got to look at in the morning. She had sharp,colourful eyes with the tint of blue, red flowing hair that stretched down fiestas her shoulders. No spots or scars on her face excisted and she had a high pitched inchanting voice and when she spoke it was if the world just stoped. "So I'm travelling with you, cool" "What? Your the kings daughter!! What's your power then?" "I'm telepathic, I can send messages to people, move objects and read minds all with my head" To show Skarin her power she made a nearby cat come to her and sit on her shoulder. "What do you do then??" she asked in her high pitched voice "Oh, er... I'm a ele..." but before Skarin could finish "Elemental, wierd that cos I thought you were mental" she chuckled "Hey watch it, or I'll" "Or what you'll rip my head off" "Get out of my head!!" Skarin screamed and stormed off towards the village, Leaving Danni to stand in the darkness alone. She knew from then on not to make jokes about Skarin, but should couldn't be bothered to find Skarin and say sorry. She went into the castle and went to her room. It would be odd for her to not be sleeping in the castle when they travelled. She quick fell asleep and forgot about the argument she and Skarin had.