Some of my poems and thought

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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:41pm

It probably because people can relate to it. At least I hope
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby HiMyNameIsJen on Dec 8 2009, 8:42pm

4th is my fav. 
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:42pm

#5

I'm told I have a burden
That isn't mine to bear.
A sense of desolation
No person should endure.
Pointless confrontations
Ending in despair.
Always keeps me asking
What we're doing here?
Never understanding
What our morals are,
Hoping that one day
Peace shall reign once more.
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:43pm

Thx everyone
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:47pm

Alright that's all the prewritten ones I did. Now when I get inspired I'll post the finished piece here. Until then enjoy what's here and feel free to comment.
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:52pm

Bump


Plz try to keep this alive. It may help someone.
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 8:56pm

Bump
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby lililililililililil on Dec 8 2009, 9:00pm

I personally like the fifth one best. Can you try a poem with a lighter mood? I understand that you are more of a realist, but I prefer more romantic (not romance) poetry.
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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 9:00pm

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Re: Some of my poems and thought

Postby colonial on Dec 8 2009, 9:01pm

I'll try
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