Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. Colonial?!?


    Your NOT inactive?!?


    HAPPY DAYS OH HAPPY DAYS!

    -Throws pokéball at Colonial-

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  2. ^Unexpected. On both Kill's and Colonial's part

    Geeze I didn't think this was still around...glad it is though. Here's something written from the other day. Enjoy.

    Good Morning

    Alarm blaring,
    Sun glaring,
    Roll out of bed,
    Ugh what was in my head...

    I remember the blood,
    Along with the zombie flood.
    It's one of the dreams,
    Before I crash into streams.

    I'm not drowning,
    I'm about to go to a Queen's crowning.
    Another world once more,
    Look down and there's another floor.

    Can't stop here,
    Now I'm at a pier?
    Where did my ship sail?
    Wait how did I get this devil's tail?

    Now demons are being summoned,
    The suicides becomong homocides of the unknown,
    My girlfriend grinning as the carnage ensues,
    Now we are pursued.

    Jump back and forth in past and present,
    We escape and are reselient,
    Going back to our work load,
    Hey let's hack again the time code.

    Now I'm in my boyfriend's home,
    I think we're about to go into the sex zone,
    Never fails with him,
    The chances are never slim.

    Reality is back,
    As the egg is given a crack,
    Peeling away the shell to have a feast?
    Not in the very least.

    Wallet is good to go,
    Hidden away with the green dough,
    I'm grabbing my keys,
    What quirky dreams.

    ...A Good Morning.
     
  3. ⇧Unexpected as well…hello.

    I don't write poetry anymore to be quite honest.
    Glad to see yours, I liked it a lot.
     
  4. Hey there, long time no see. Yeah randomly pop in to say hi to friends who are still very active. Check forums once in a blue too. How ya been?

    Thanks though. And hey the last one ya made was pretty good so don't sell yourself short.

    I write once in a blue now these days, but I'm trying for consistency to get myself back into writing more again. Fanfics been helping with that too.
     
  5. These poems were fantastic! You are an amazing writer. :-D
     
  6. Im trying to write a new novel, been posting on figment mainly, havent done poetry in a while, that was an oldie. Glad to see you around though. What kind of fanfics?
     
  7. Hello Killzone here,

    Let us light it up tonight
    In flames this world shall take flight
    As people run from each other
    Avoid each other
    In the night we'll know, there will never be no other
    World that can support many different species
    A world that can hold emotions and make them still
    Change within seasons
    And hold years within will
    No other planet has done it
    We still haven't figured it out
    But tonight lets put down the flames somehow
    Save it together
    Make sure it all burns out
    Water is thicker
    Than these flames now



    Well I just wrote a poem for the first time in like 5 months, It sucks but it seriously took me 15minutes :/ I'm going to try and start this again.
     
  8. (Wrote this while a bit down unfortunately. This was from the previous morning).

    What a Lesson

    Sometimes you remember that there is doubt in your life.
    Enough to make you the marksman.
    You don’t wish to deal with this strife,
    But another part of you tells you keep trying woman….

    Why should you?
    It only le4ds to t4ars..
    Maybe you do not wish to face those f4ars…
    Sounds about right ha ha there’s your cu3…..

    You want to not make the doubt stronger,
    But your mind reminds you why hold back,
    It reminds you what they lack,
    Compared to you,
    The list seems longer…

    It makes you feel horrible,
    And your lips tremble,
    Because you feel these thoughts shouldn’t exist,
    Yet they so much persist….

    Cry, cry, cry…
    Until it runs dry, dry, dry..
    That is what you were taught?
    Were you not….
    Little puppy…

    Figment neh? First person I know who posts on there. Most others either keep their novel in the notebooks or on tumblr as well. Still that's great that you're getting your writing out there!

    And your poem had more of its power at the beginning, the ending more so reminds of the fact that the flames can burn out. So in a way the idea of flames followed through your writing.

    My fanfics...well consist of Magic the Gathering and...honestly a little shy to say what other fandom cause I may be ridiculed for it. ^^;
     
  9. Omigosh! Where have you people been and why did it take me so long to find you? These are amazing!!
     
  10. Keeping this alive! Col miss ya bro! Here's another poem.Short and simple.

    Tender

    Look at you,
    Giving me that cue.
    Fingers entangling,
    Keys dangling.
    Eyes locked on one another,
    No one to give a bother.
    Move in slowly,
    Just like the first.
    Grinning so coyly,
    Lips connect the bless and the curse.
    Now we’re in the dark,
    Losing ourselves to the art.
    Passions seeps from thy lips,
    Another kiss.
    Tender softness,
    Bound in the darkness.
    Hands fleeting,
    Too fast retreating.
    Open our eyes,
    Soft sighs.
    Smiling gently,
    Whispering intently.
     
  11. These are a load of rubbish
     
  12. Zero's #1 Last Man

    The wintery heart
    The cold blue-black soul
    Relieved, finally, for the freedom
    Never again will deafening sounds be brought
    From loud drums, and crazy hums
    World is empty of extremists and politics
    All that remains is me
    The last man, that's me
    Ahhh.... Peace at last
     
  13. #2 Drumming On

    Ratta-tat-tat the sound of the drums of war
    Of human feet charging for More
    Death, the game, begins
    Starting all sins
    Ratta-tat-tat the guns crack
    The line falters, fresh men pick up the slack
    Bullets zing past our heads
    Politics start to leave boys dead
    Ratta-tat-tat machine guns rattle and growl
    Trenches fill with blood and the smell is foul
    The start of life ends here
    End of war seemingly draws near
    Ratta-tat-.... Boom.
     
  14. Been a while since I shared anything but something for the new year, i wrote a while ago, sharing now for my daughter, my hero.



    That call that makes your heart stop..
    Watching as the ambulance staff
    try to make you breathe...

    Sitting....nurses, doctors everywhere..
    You smile through it all,
    brave for me
    as i sit in a shattered mess.

    More ambulances arrive,
    This hospital can't help anymore...
    They have done all they can.

    Sirens ring through my head,
    I watch in a blur...
    needles...machines....its everywhere.

    As they pump air into you,
    I can hear screams,
    As i am led away I realise it is me

    Im empty,
    crumpled on the floor,
    as you fight for your life again.

    After what feels like years,
    Doctors emerge,
    shutting the doors
    as my heart bleeds

    Doctors talk but words blur..
    Lungs...
    collapsed....
    charchoal....
    oxygen.....
    struggle.....
    transplant.....
    The words roll through my head
    only stopping to hear "Wont see the night through"

    Life ended there...
    You were 9
    You're body wouldn't be able to cope

    For days we sat,
    holding your hand,
    reading...talking....crying....

    Slowly you came too,
    drinking....smiling....struggling...
    You were fighting this
    You are a hero, my hero...
    You fought when i gave up.

    In bed you learnt KAW,
    wrote poems galore,
    You spoke, I listened
    Plans you made for your future, things to do...
    I learnt so much but yearned for more...

    Your fight had just began
    oxygen therapy,
    specialists,
    lung function tests,
    All apart of your life forever now,
    But you never complain,
    One day you will be free.

    Waiting for that call
    That call to end it all....
     
  15. I want to say I feel like dying
    But I don’t want to make it look like
    Its all for attention

    Sometimes I fear that empty space
    When all I hear is ringing near
    Miscellaneous thoughts
    Out of body
    Snap me back to my reality

    The quivering legs and trembling hands
    Leave me to worry what underlies
    Instead I wonder who even cares
    I can’t bare to lose them
    Because I’m mentally not there

    Everything I do, is out of pity
    Of hate and disdain
    I like to think I’m smart or funny
    But the way he responds
    There is no response

    But am I to blame
    I obviously am
    Because who could love
    A self-pitying fool
    With manipulatives desires