I was told I should create a thread for these. Plz take the time to read them. And tell me what you think. I'll update as I think of them.
Here's the 1st one When we leave this plane of exsistance we try to leave behind a legacy or a memory of some great deed either of good or evil. When we move on we will always leave a mark, a mark of what we've done and acomplished. Wether it's a path of destruction, or a movement of selflessness, something is left behind for the world to learn from. People will always seek imortality in any form they find most pleasing to them. We're always looking for the dare to be great feeling, a feeling of acceptance in our lives. Some find this extrodanary feeling while the majority are left In the dust losing sight of what matters. Those people end up losing sight of their dreams just because they gave up. Though on occasion someone comes along offering guidance. It could be a path of financial help, spirtual help, or even physical guidance, eventually someone will offer a hand wether we ask for it or not. No matter what happens in life, ALWAYS look for those willing to asist you on your journey in life. Those people could be anyone from a family member or a complete stranger passing by. If you ever find yourself doubting your judgement or feeling like the world would be better off without you, think again. There are many people around you who learn from you and look up to you for guidance. You may not realize it at all, but you do make a differance in many ways.
Here's the 2nd one Off-track and confused Wondering which direction to go Questioning past decicions Hoping they were right Asking myself what to do Waiting for my answer Lost in darkness Trying to find a sliver of light Calling out silently To someone for guidence Quietly wishing for a little hope Never sure what will show Feeling cold and empty Searching for myself Hoping the end of my struggle Is close to an end Just as those befor us Searching for global love
I know here's the 3rd Lost without direction Searching but unsure for what Pondering the unimaginable Wondering the impossible Asking what tomorrow will bring Questioning every thought that passes through my mind Contemplating what others will think of me Unsure what I am doing in life and where I will end up Seeking someone that understands my delima Hoping I will find myself
The 4th There is a time in everyones life where we feel lost and unsure what our heading is. We may think we are alone and that no one knows how we feel, but we must realize everyone has been through this phase. Maybe not as severe or the same problem. What I am talking about is Depression, it happens to all of us no matter how old you are. For everyone the symptoms differ. It may develop through stress or it might be genetic. Ether way you are not alone, no matter what you think there are people around you ready and waiting to help you through your journey. All you have to do is look around, it could be a friend, family member, or just take a look around.
Gotta say normally i don't like poetry but this is really good it shows the point very well and it's easy to get very beautiful better then the crap I'm reading in school
#5 I'm told I have a burden That isn't mine to bear. A sense of desolation No person should endure. Pointless confrontations Ending in despair. Always keeps me asking What we're doing here? Never understanding What our morals are, Hoping that one day Peace shall reign once more.
Alright that's all the prewritten ones I did. Now when I get inspired I'll post the finished piece here. Until then enjoy what's here and feel free to comment.
I personally like the fifth one best. Can you try a poem with a lighter mood? I understand that you are more of a realist, but I prefer more romantic (not romance) poetry.