A Final Farewell

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 28, 2010.

  1. A Final Farewell

    You know I can't even save myself,
    Put your hopes in somebody else.

    The mournful howling of the wind,
    Grieves the mess we've gotten in.

    Sadness wieghs me, pulls me down,
    So much that I fear I will drown.

    My head sinks below the tide,
    So deep in dispair, I doubt I'll survive.

    Not even you can give me hope,
    Without oxegyn, how can I cope?

    I sink deep down, into the depths,
    Full of apathy, I don't fear death.

    My feet touch a bottom of sand,
    I don't feel brave enough to stand.

    Underwater I hear your anguished yell,
    One last time, I say farewell. 
     
  2. Jesus, I thought you were quitting. 
     
  3. I hate poetry:( But I'm sure that you are somewhat okay at it
     
  4. Shes good at it. Thx for sharing lady! Excellent as always
     
  5. I also thought you were quitting for a second. Then I realized it was a poem
     
  6. Lol, No! I wouldn't quit! It seems that only yesterday I was joining!
     
  7. Not one of the best title choices.
     
  8. Lol, I realize that Now, but it suits the poem!
     
  9. God its so sad, it makes me think of my grandpa:,(
     
  10. Farewell, I never knew u