The Disaster

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MasterSlayerALi, Sep 24, 2010.

  1. This is a book. Please comment after each chapter. The more comments the more i write.
     
  2. Chapter 1- Amnesia

    I awoke in a daze with an ice-pack on my forehead. I got up and looked around i did not know where i was. I started calling out for help but then a large and black haired man popped out of another room and said "Shhhhh u never know who is in here." I walked towards him and i asked him "Who are you.... who am i."
     
  3. Chapter 2- A Missing Page

    "Just call me Jo," the man said. All of a sudden he pulled out an axe from behind a cubicul and chucked it at me. That is your weapon if you lose you will fight with your bare hands. I walked out of the small room to find that we were in an aeroplane that looked like it just recently crashed. He ran infront of me and whispered " A company called RZX should come and help us soon they deal with messed up hell holes like this. I saw a amputated hand on the floor as i ran past with Jo.
     
  4. Okay..........It's fine but make it longer each chapter should be at least 5 or 6 paragraphs long