the Moon and the mermaid part 1

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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby AngryFred1138 on Aug 11 2016, 2:28pm

So I see we've moved on to an aquatic theme. Does this mean we are finally getting the wereshark story we've been so eagerly awaiting?
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby suptis2 on Aug 11 2016, 3:13pm

Suptis?
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby Great_Atuin on Aug 11 2016, 4:54pm

Eiwa wrote:
Lonesong wrote:
She isn't spamming forums this time. She appears to be keeping all the parts on this thread


Are we on the same forum? Part 2 is its own thread.

Atuin, you should at least point out the positive aspects of Suzanne's work. What do you like best about it? 

The thing I like best about it is how she can spell correctly most of the time...
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby Amaryllis on Aug 11 2016, 7:03pm

Interesting story
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby Eiwa on Aug 11 2016, 7:16pm

AngryFred1138 wrote:So I see we've moved on to an aquatic theme. Does this mean we are finally getting the wereshark story we've been so eagerly awaiting?


Damn it you actually made me read the story, and there isn't any aquatic theme in sight. The only animal that was mention was a cougar (no spoilers, read it yourself).

I can't believe that I read the whole thing. Now I'm breathless like a fish out of water from reading without pausing. There, how does that lame pun goes for aquatic theme?
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 2

Postby -Deadly- on Aug 11 2016, 10:03pm

Great_Atuin wrote:PS: I'm pretty sure at least 4 people have died in the last few days of asphyxiation from trying to read her stories.


You don't understand.

When I read her stories, when I run out of breath reading them...


Such a story leaves me breathless.
Well, plus it awakens something inside of me.
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby Jackson on Aug 12 2016, 12:07am

I own Suzanne therefore I now own all rights to these stories. All compliments must go to me, and me only. All criticism towards lack of punctuation must go to Suzanne as I don't like complaints.

TL;dr I AM YOUR MASTERS!



K, bai
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby Suzanne on Aug 12 2016, 11:27am

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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby Pheles on Aug 12 2016, 11:54am

If you and your family just ran away from a sea captain why are you living in the palace? Was he holding you captive or what? Why are in the palace? Are you royalty?
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Re: the Moon and the mermaid part 1

Postby shaktira on Aug 12 2016, 8:19pm

There is no punctuation or line breaks. It makes me nauseous to read regardless of content quality
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