wings of heart part 2

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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby lIlDlRIilZlZIYlIl_tHe-VALkyrIE on Aug 8 2016, 11:44pm

Bravo bravo
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Great_Atuin on Aug 9 2016, 12:21am

Suzanne you should try punctuation sometime.
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Suzanne on Aug 9 2016, 9:36am

no I'm fine
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Great_Atuin on Aug 9 2016, 9:47am

Suzanne wrote:no I'm fine

You're right, wouldn't want to make it readable
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Suzanne on Aug 9 2016, 7:17pm

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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Amaryllis on Aug 16 2016, 6:04pm

Nice story
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Nate on Aug 16 2016, 6:26pm

10/10 is gud
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby NinjaFresh on Aug 16 2016, 6:58pm

You gotta remember where u leave ur sword :( ...it's adventurer basics
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby 0o_-Wh_ite-EAGLE-ki_ng-_o0 on Aug 16 2016, 7:05pm

Great_Atuin wrote:Suzanne you should try punctuation sometime.

Lol the common forum troll how's the trolling going
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Pheles on Aug 16 2016, 7:26pm

If you forgot your sword how are you going to kill it? And if killing it is possible why would you run back and tell your dad a wolf is trying to kill people? Why not just kill it?
Also how is running back to tell your dad an option when its standing over you ready to pounce?

Not downing you, you have a great imagination, just put some thought into whats plausible, even fantasy fans want things to be possible.
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