wings of heart part 2

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wings of heart part 2

Postby Suzanne on Jun 3 2016, 3:22pm

We were heading out to vampire King's castle i looked at the young man who was walking beside me what is your name my name is Andrew Drew for short he said I smiled that is a nice name Andrew smiled at me and I looked at the sky only to see a full moon i looked back at Andrew I saw that he was on the forest floor screaming in pain as his body began to crack and take shape in the form of a wolf i began to run from him deeper into the forest but he was chasing me until I tripped over a stick Andrew had caught up with me and he walked towards me growling ready to pounce on me I must do something before I get eaten by Drew I tried to grab my sword but I had forgotten that I had left it on the side of my saddle with my horse what must I do should I go tell my father that there is a dangerous wolf trying to attack me or should I just kill it myself without getting killed nor bitten myself
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Garfield on Jun 3 2016, 11:29pm

Kill it yourself!
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby llIIIlIlKHSHAYARSHAIIlllIlI on Jun 4 2016, 12:32am

That's going a tad far lol but please stop, it's not good, your grammar is appalling and your story telling worse.
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby ____-----Perished__--Away---__ on Jun 4 2016, 1:06am

:O next part??
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby _______D_A_R_K_N_E_S_S_______ on Jun 4 2016, 1:19am

U know if it was a full moon already why was he not already a wolf.


Plz write shorter "stories" that took me too long to spot
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby Suzanne on Jun 4 2016, 7:05am

I am fine with writing long stories thanks anyway
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby HeartFaII on Jun 4 2016, 7:18am

Ale-handro wrote:Kill it yourself!

Chill.
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby PRIME on Jun 4 2016, 8:25am

What else is for dinner? Will there be side dishes, and if so, what?
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby _______D_A_R_K_N_E_S_S_______ on Jun 4 2016, 8:30am

Suzanne wrote:I am fine with writing long stories thanks anyway

U didnt answer my question..
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Re: wings of heart part 2

Postby XXIXIIX_monkey-poo_XIIXIIX on Jun 4 2016, 8:42am

Suzanne wrote:I am fine with writing long stories thanks anyway


butthurt
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