The Origins of time (2)

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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby XxThunder_BirdxX on Apr 7 2012, 12:53pm

At least some ppl are not fail trollers.
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby FeatherHunter on Apr 7 2012, 1:22pm

I'm not trolling...
I'm a poet, like Edgar Allan Poe,
Though I'm handsome, I look like David,
Scuplted by Michaelangelo,
I'm a genius, as most of you know,
Like Albert, Benjamin, and Leonardo...
I'm a writer, like William Shakespeare,
Some one you should fear...
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby Alarmof4 on Apr 7 2012, 1:50pm

Literally this is the worst story in FF, it made me laugh, but I was laughing that some one could be stupid enough to write this. As I was reading I was thinking only an idiot could think this would be even remotely acceptable. Just stop writing for the sake of everyone here.
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby RETRIBUTION on Apr 7 2012, 1:57pm

Wow this is 
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby FeatherHunter on Apr 7 2012, 2:02pm

WHOA WHOA WHOA! THIS IS NOT THE WORST STORY. I'VE SEEN MUCH WORSE. Don't be so hard on her. Yes, she needs constructive criticism. No, you don't have to be SO harsh that it destroys her self confidence and causes her to commit suicide or worse.
I'm a poet, like Edgar Allan Poe,
Though I'm handsome, I look like David,
Scuplted by Michaelangelo,
I'm a genius, as most of you know,
Like Albert, Benjamin, and Leonardo...
I'm a writer, like William Shakespeare,
Some one you should fear...
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby cheesemuffin on Apr 7 2012, 2:20pm

There are worse things than suicide?

Do tell, sir.
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby FeatherHunter on Apr 7 2012, 2:39pm

I don't plan on derailing.
I'm a poet, like Edgar Allan Poe,
Though I'm handsome, I look like David,
Scuplted by Michaelangelo,
I'm a genius, as most of you know,
Like Albert, Benjamin, and Leonardo...
I'm a writer, like William Shakespeare,
Some one you should fear...
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby d_bo_assassin on Apr 7 2012, 3:52pm

the story itself wasn't even funny. ignoring the structure and layout of the story itself.

it wasn't well thought out or clever.

it was a stupid garbage story.

@firerock

I call it like I see it. and this story was crap
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby XxThunder_BirdxX on Apr 7 2012, 9:53pm

↑ fail troller
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby XxThunder_BirdxX on Apr 7 2012, 10:31pm

@d_bo_assassin

You've critisized other stories aswell.
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