The Origins of time (2)

[d_bo_assassin]

oh we're laughing. but not for the reason you had hoped or intended.

the story SUCKED the white off rice.

[Jurry]

Our Creator looked upon Earth and thought: 'Life shall become reality soon...'. He built three kingdoms, one green, one red and one blue. Nowadays, we know that the kingdoms were the first Monarch, Conqueror and Defender kingdoms. He blessed all three kingdoms and hoped they would be peaceful.

[XxThunder_BirdxX]

The whole story is a joke

[Jurry]

[XxThunder_BirdxX]

Tell me why its rubbish

[FireRock14545]

How dare you people fail-troll such an innocent young pup!

I liked it ^_^....mostly because of your name. Name twins! (well...irl lol)

[d_bo_assassin]

@firerock

nobody is fail trolling here. any reasonably sane and competent person understands this story is garbage

[FireRock14545]

Well exactly what story are you comparing it to? It's not like she's trying to **** get it published! It's a cute little tale, and calling it garbage is way out of line.

Last time I checked, I am both sane and competent. How about you >_>

[XxThunder_BirdxX]

Thanks for the feedback!

[FeatherHunter]

It could be better... longer... more detail... I didn't think it was funny...