The Origins of time (2)

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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby d_bo_assassin on Apr 7 2012, 11:57am

oh we're laughing. but not for the reason you had hoped or intended.

the story SUCKED the white off rice.
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby Jurry on Apr 7 2012, 11:58am

Maya55 wrote:Our Creator looked upon Earth and thought: 'Life shall become reality soon...'. He built three kingdoms, one green, one red and one blue. Nowadays, we know that the kingdoms were the first Monarch, Conqueror and Defender kingdoms. He blessed all three kingdoms and hoped they would be peaceful.

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Not the best grammar in KAW :P
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby XxThunder_BirdxX on Apr 7 2012, 12:07pm

The whole story is a joke
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby Jurry on Apr 7 2012, 12:08pm

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Not the best grammar in KAW :P
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby XxThunder_BirdxX on Apr 7 2012, 12:09pm

Tell me why its rubbish
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby FireRock14545 on Apr 7 2012, 12:12pm

How dare you people fail-troll such an innocent young pup!

I liked it ^_^....mostly because of your name. Name twins! (well...irl lol)
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby d_bo_assassin on Apr 7 2012, 12:35pm

@firerock

nobody is fail trolling here. any reasonably sane and competent person understands this story is garbage
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby FireRock14545 on Apr 7 2012, 12:38pm

Well exactly what story are you comparing it to? It's not like she's trying to **** get it published! It's a cute little tale, and calling it garbage is way out of line.

Last time I checked, I am both sane and competent. How about you >_>
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby XxThunder_BirdxX on Apr 7 2012, 12:45pm

Thanks for the feedback!
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Re: The Origins of time (2)

Postby FeatherHunter on Apr 7 2012, 12:52pm

It could be better... longer... more detail... I didn't think it was funny...
I'm a poet, like Edgar Allan Poe,
Though I'm handsome, I look like David,
Scuplted by Michaelangelo,
I'm a genius, as most of you know,
Like Albert, Benjamin, and Leonardo...
I'm a writer, like William Shakespeare,
Some one you should fear...
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