Separate names with a comma.
Jonathan Safran Foer. :) North Korea... My family's from the South. Lol.
Oh I don't disagree ^^ I mean, either you could separate every quotation (once a new person speaks) into new paragraphs like they do in most...
Having multiple people's quotations stuck besides each other - looks a bit messy :O
Continue please :) The only downside would be that it's a bit tough to read due to formatting.
... Huh?
Finally got the second chapter up... tell me what you think please :)
Chapter 2: Capture or Destroy Lily shuffled her feet impatiently, sitting on a sofa while readjusting the flower tucked into her brown hair. A...
You mean the format was supposed to be strange? O_o I don't mean the plot or story format, just the way it was posted.
Hmm, this is the opinion of an amateur but I'd say continue. The formatting for Relentless Love seems a bit weird so it might deter readers. But...
I have no idea... I guess a broad way to say it would be fantasy with a touch of real life as well. I should read some more stories on here, and...
I should probably acquaint myself with all regulars here, if I'm planning on staying throughout the school year and the remainder of my summer...
Wyvern: My story is finally up; should I have separated it a bit more for the first chapter? :(
Feedback for The Dragon's Gifted; I would link it but I have no idea how to do it correctly. It's my first story here so feel free to help me on...
Note: Written by Wyvern, posted by Paradigm due to technical difficulties. Please don't post here, I'll go put up a feedback thread right away....
Re: GlooMi's Guide to Writing Fascinating, I'll have to browse it a second time. Personally I always think of an ending first, and figure out...
Bastion (and maybe for other guys who have been in the company longer): Is the editing mandatory? I've seen you post several times about an...